Chap. 5, pg. 28: everything
Learning moment from this page: Eventually… you just have to decide on dialogue. What Jona says is kind of a dark line for this comic and I dithered. A lot. There’s a line in a song from the musical ‘If/Then,’ which is “I was needy, I was greedy, and I just didn’t think/That’s a lie/I thought about it a lot/I had lots of warning thoughts I forgot/just another bad decision I guess/just another pile of crap in the mess” and that’s what writing and rewriting and rewriting dialogue for these pages feels like.
Lmao it’s… kind of funny xD Oh Jona. I’m glad they’re opening up to Oryx about it all. Love the dynamic scenery too with the steep hill and the grass illustration.