Chap. 5, pg. 25: Things to do
Learning moment from this page: The middle three panels possibly should have been tighter/closer, there’s too much distance in them, but the sixth and seventh panels were always going to be close… it’s tricky. Any page that I want to land emotionally is challenging and I dunno if this one does.
It’s nice to not be moving. Means that I actually whip through this page on Sunday night instead of Monday night/TuesDAY.
Aww, Jona.