Chap. 5, pg. 11: Forfeited
Learning moment from this page: I’d say ‘more worldbuilding’ but I did have a good worldbuild structure when I started. It’s just that was three years ago and things evolved and the plot didn’t even always go where I thought and I’m very wordy. Anyway: this is the Learning Moment. Do your worldbuilding. Then adapt your worldbuilding and pretend consistency is an achievable goal.
Additional notage: all right. We’re back. I got like…. well, all the pages physically exist in some stage now. All of them have text, and paneling, and blocking. It’s 205 pages total (which would make it . We’re probably sticking to these verrrrry rough greys through the end because I’m going to have to get them all into shape when I go back through and fix things.
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