Learning moment from this page:  I practiced by copying an inking style I really liked (_asmeesh on instagram, specifically), wrote some notes on what they were doing, then tried to cross apply some of it to my inking technique. I’m never happy with my inking, but I do like this page’s lineart, and the last page. Rolling back the page expectation has so far meant I like the art a bunch more. It may also be that I’m just getting into the roller coaster part of the story that I’ve wanted to draw anyway. PLUS, bought some Zebra mechanical pencils to replace my longstanding generic one and so far I like the handling a lot.