Chap. 4, pg. 2: Still
Learning moment from this page: In general with this scene, cutting unnecessary background. There’s reams of stuff I thought about but it’s… really not needed, I don’t think.
Annnnd sorry it’s late.
No Love Lost
Graphic Novel
Learning moment from this page: In general with this scene, cutting unnecessary background. There’s reams of stuff I thought about but it’s… really not needed, I don’t think.
Annnnd sorry it’s late.
Wow… he’s really gonna ask to die early and then ladle some extra guilt on his son with his dying words, when he could have just waited… what a cold cold bastard lol. Like the transition here – it feels clear what’s past and then jolting back to present.