Chap. 4, pg. 13: what if
Learning moment from this page: Found a continuity error in the early pages while I was updating for the ComicFury mirror. I’ve updated it over there, but not here yet. Bringing all the narrative into alignment is a bit of a chore, but thankfully a possible one.
Edit: Oh my God, I have named two minor characters James. THIS person is going to get to keep the name, my earlier James is going to be renamed. Partially because I was still type-lettering then and now I’m hand lettering. Sheesh. I know more names than James.
Also, this scene has been through a lot of iterations. I like it.
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