Chap. 3, pg. 44: On my side
Learning moment from this page: : Look at the plot and cut the fat away. Originally, there were a lot more cats, a lot more places, a lot more people but… the story doesn’t need that. I personally need them to go to the woods again though, because my horizon lines are a Problem. The greys on this page also Aren’t Great but it’s 11:42 and I need sleep before the existential crisis kicks in.
Yeah hopefully Paolo doesn’t find himself in Jona’s hood by the end of this lol