Chap. 3, pg. 22: Assistant Manager
Learning moment from this page: : Need more definition/foreshortening… this page looks super busy to me, still.
Other note: Question (as I am about a dozen pages ahead and thinking about this): Is this text hard to read? Too faint, too big, too small, poorly spaced? Would it be better hand-lettered? I’m trying to minimize text-based issues resulting in fall-off… Comments are turned on.
Lmao personal assistant manager, not TO THE manager.
I think I’m a bad person because when I read Hyacinth was 4 I was just thinking at least the body will be a lot easier to carry for Jona… >.>
Love the shot of them walking through the city.