Learning moment from this page: : Nothing to note about this page, aside from composing it shouldn’t have been this hard.
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Chapter Two
53 comics.
Learning moment from this page: : Don’t make a shirt full black. Hair is one thing, shirts have to convey a lot of body movement and when someone takes it off, you have to do a lot of finagling.
Learning moment from this page: : Nothing in particular, I think I was working on communicating time passing/evening setting in.
Learning moment from this page: : None comes to mind.
Learning moment from this page: : None comes to mind. Tweaked some dialogue from earlier drafts.
Learning moment from this page: : Doing more dialogue work and, if I remember right, working and reworking panel composition. I don’t like interiors, but sometimes, y’just gotta be in a house.
Learning moment from this page: : Communicating the light source and dark of the environment when you have someone in a black shirt and a grey cat.
Learning moment from this page: : At a certain point, you do have to just stop tweaking dialogue.
Learning moment from this page: : Communicating gradient changes in light sources. Also, I think the neighbors got another cat, unless I’m looking at a different window.
Learning moment from this page: : Communicating the weird pops with color. It’s a little ghosty, but not overwhelming ghosty. Y’know, like cats.