Learning moment from this page: : Nothing specific for this page. Tried some over the shoulder shading, but it’s not really working.
Chapter Three
Learning moment from this page: : Need more definition/foreshortening… this page looks super busy to me, still. Other note: Question (as I am about a dozen pages ahead and thinking about this): Is this text hard to read? Too faint, too[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: : If you do not need and do not want to draw a person in the scene, find a way not to draw them. If it progresses character interactions all the same, yay.
Learning moment from this page: : More practice with that greyscale background texture. It’s getting… better-ish.
Learning moment from this page: : Experimenting with the wash and carving out lighting in this page. Mixed results. There aren’t enough full black shapes on these pages. NOTE: Feels like the next two pages should have a content warning for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: : Nothing worth mentioning, but hey and hooray, this page has a few more big black spaces.
Learning moment from this page: : Nothing worth mentioning. The expression work is just challenging. Edit: Came back and edited that first panel for being crap, but the website is refusing to display the updated image… so, if there is still[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: : Let dialogue evolve. Conversation definitely wasn’t originally going in the direction it now does. Don’t know how I feel about the art at the moment but am planning a change.