Edit: 08/2022 replaced page. Learning moment from this page: Nothing dramatic for this one, other than the value of setting goals. I wanted to get flatted to page 13 this weekend. After about 6 episodes of Yellowstone last night, and[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Chapter One
Edit: 08/2022 replaced page. Learning moment from this page: Continuity. I almost forgot to put in that box in the first panel, which sets up for picking it up in that second to last panel.
Edit: 08/2022 re uploaded. Learning moment from this page: Hang on to what works when you can, redo what doesn’t. This page was so pretty colored, but I can’t color 200+ pages for the sake of pg. 13.
Edit: 09/2022 re uploaded. Learning moment from this page: Draw big. I run into that with a lot of these pages. They’re better, but drawing small means over-rendering backgrounds. Edit: Learning moment in 2/10/24 reupload – so! The locksmith turned[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Edit: 09/2022 re uploaded. Learning moment from this page: Again, youtube reference is gold. Hunted around until I found the motion I was looking for.
Edit: 09/2022 re uploaded. Learning moment from this page: Try not to underestimate whether or not you’ll have to draw something again later. I like that first panel’s angle a lot, but it screwed me over later.
Edit: 09/2022 re uploaded. Original dialogue from 10/4/21: “Okay! I said I would upload the next scene by end of Sept, but I took a comics class (which basically means I’m going to Start Over Now), but am uploading this[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Edit: 09/2022 re uploaded. Learning moment from this page: Nothing from the page specifically, there was a lot of stuff learned in reconfiguring this section, writing-wise, to move much faster and be less dependent on eavesdropping.
Learning moment from this page: Okay, last time fixing this puppy. I’ve managed to fix almost everything I was frustrated with about it or realized later was bad. Within reason.