Learning moment from this page: Trying to show not tell. Saira came out looking like a unit, due to the angle, but that’s cats for you.
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Chapter Four
32 comics.
Learning moment from this page: Reworked the dialogue on this page, partially because I realized fundamentally what Paolo was proposing, so he and I got to have that realization together. Also, leaning into body language. And badly drawing snakes. Thank[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: Found a continuity error in the early pages while I was updating for the ComicFury mirror. I’ve updated it over there, but not here yet. Bringing all the narrative into alignment is a bit of[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: One of my great weaknesses is adding trees where there don’t need to be trees. Then remembering trees are frustrating. Here are some trees. I do like the art on this page… aside from unnecessary[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: This page leaves me wishing I’d better explained how the cure/modifier system works. I may have to go back and help out with that explanation earlier, with like… Candor. Also, I THINK I figured out[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: You can drape a pillow in an old roommate’s abandoned skirt and it will adequately pretend to be a character model for your purposes. Bedtime. It’s very bedtime.
Learning moment from this page: Reworked the dialogue over and over and over. Interestingly… the bridge from ‘A Perfect Fit’ by Dresden Dolls works better for this than I thought. Music’s very important to me. Anyway. Sorry. Edit: In an[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: I stumbled on mitchleeuwe’s composition guidelines on instagram and put a bunch of them on my wall to see if they help me design better/easier to read panels. I always consider it being more of[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: I could say it’s late cause I’m sick, which would be true, but it’s much more that it was a difficult page. The greys are not final, but they are as far along as I[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: well… mostly… pushing through in the end… we are gonna be in this inn for a second. Which means I’ll have to draw that first environment again. The level of dread for replicating that room[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…