Learning moment from this page: Nothing worth mentioning. I know what I wanted to do with this page and it… I don’t think it happened.
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Chapter Five
38 comics.
Learning moment from this page: Nothing worth mentioning. I’m on the tail end of moving so I’ve been… extremely lazy. And started writing a new novel instead of working on wrapping up the NLL pages. Also, should Paolo be apologizing?[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: Mm. Nothing worth mentioning. Work ahead, so when everything hits the fan, you can still look like you can put something together.
Learning moment from this page: Nothing worth reporting. Just finished moving out of my last apartment so the page is even more bare bones than usual. 😐 Plus, like… oh I don’t know. We’re gonna see what the week brings.
Learning moment from this page: The middle three panels possibly should have been tighter/closer, there’s too much distance in them, but the sixth and seventh panels were always going to be close… it’s tricky. Any page that I want to[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: Nothing worth mentioning.
Learning moment from this page: Well, I had to do some googling about trespassing. Crossing farmland usually requires permission and, at the very least, not walking directly on crops since you’re literally walking on their livelihood. I tried to indicate[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: Eventually… you just have to decide on dialogue. What Jona says is kind of a dark line for this comic and I dithered. A lot. There’s a line in a song from the musical ‘If/Then,’[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Learning moment from this page: this page is/was eternally in rewrites, as many of these pages were. Edit. Edit edit edit.
Learning moment from this page: Eh. Rewrites. Trying to distill thoughts from the past 15 years or so is hard. Writing a comic plot over three years and turning it into a narrative that holds itself together from a SINGLE[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…